Remember that Poem?
I decided to put the poem on some stationary. The only problem is, I couldn't figure out how to connect the 2 pages together. LOL Anyway, there it is....
posted by Zeppelinlady at 9:15 PM
Sunday, March 05, 2006
I decided to put the poem on some stationary. The only problem is, I couldn't figure out how to connect the 2 pages together. LOL Anyway, there it is....
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24 Comments:
I love it!!! Have you decided to enter it in any contests??
Awww. the answer is "yes, darling, YES!!!"
dabich,
Thanks. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it. I hardly think it warrants consideration for any contest or award but it is one of the many poems I've written that I'm proud of. (hence the copyright)
As I've stated before, and I'm sure it shows, I've never had any former poetry training so I just write what I feel or what comes into my mind....
I started writing this particular poem about 3 or 4 months ago with only 12 lines written--only to comeback, continue and finish it inside of 15 minutes in January. Sometimes the words come fast and sometimes not so fast. Hopefully one day I will come up with something that is truly "notable or worthy" of publishing. *smilin'*
scribe,
Which question are you answering sir? --weather or not you're loved or my needing to be punished?
hee hee...
Opps typo...make that *whether* lol
both?
So, might we say that the severity of my punishment will bring to light a "ratings scale" on the extent of your answer to the other question?? In other words...How much you're loved.
BTW...whatever happened to that being you refer to as, "That yellow-haired demonic being who refers to itself as 'Girlfriend'?"
I sense unholiness in this place and I hate it when I'm not included in that kinda stuff!!!
No unholiness here. All are welcome here in this place of..ahhh...Limbo, yes that's it.*wink*
You wrote this? The copyright had me fooled. I thought it was something you found and wanted to share.
It is an excellent, heartfelt poem. Good job
Thanks, & yes I wrote it. Why does the copyright fool you?
Zep, lady, it definitely is worthy of publication and entering a contest, don't be so modest!
dabich, you're too kind. Thanks so much! It really means alot to know that people actually think highly of my poetry. I'm flattered. *blushing*
good stuff, good stuff...
best when read naked. (by the author)
It's true! Silly girl.
scribe,
How did you know....wait, you've been peeping in my window again haven't you?! ;))
dabich,
I think we should add a blindfold to scribe's restraints.(handcuffs, shackels, blindfold) LOL -this could be fun!
Now you're talkin, girl ;)
I might have to let that happen.
I'm thinkin he'd enjoy it waaayyy too much ;)
'twould be a most divine sexperience.
dabich, you may be right but, remember...with the sweet comes the bitter. First he must be initiated with the ceremonial toast to "chesnuts roasting on an open fire."
minister, with your infinite power, I'm sure you can take the heat, huh...;)
Aye, child, the roasting of nuts is not a new thing to this man of the silk (cloth is for broke-ass preachers). What dost thou thinkest mine relationship hath been lo thes years?
Thanks for letting me know that you're a (rich-ace preacher) scribe. Good news for me...NO TITHES! LOL
Hmmm, since it seems that you rather enjoy pain,(with girlfriend serving up a new dish to you daily) i should do away with my pliers, hammer, nails,whips, chains,rope and other assorted accessories...pit`ee No punishment for you--THAT'S YOUR PUNISHMENT! HA!
ooo, that's hot. you're all takin' control LOL
Um, I mean...all hail!
Why minister, you sound alil' confused. Please, my dear man...you must not lose conrol. Don't hurt ya-self na! Amen.
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